interesting, unique, in need of focus
Let's get this out of the way, you're anima-jation is amazing, you did so much and I respect you immensely for that that. Also the world you've created is fascinating. I love it, and would gladly want to see more of it.
However, the plot it self is a little hit and miss for me. Maybe their was another chapter somewhere I didn't see, but their was a lot of jumping and strange spot's that broke the flow. Why is their no gov? What has Evolve done recently and how did it come to be? Why so much mass oppression? Why is their only one church? These questions don't need to be flat out told to you, in fact, subtly is often a key virtue with story telling, but I need some reason to feel attached to these characters.